"Butterflies"
By: Julia Swicionis
Nonsense Poem
Flit, Flap, Fly,
The wings of the Butterfly,
Free flying through the sky,
Absolutely beautiful, so boudhie.
They’re graceful, gorgeous, and glabsting,
Fortoble, Fabulous, and Fascinating,
They’re one of nature’s most exciting,
Unforgettable; zoterplodeferfing.
The wings, and the bodice, can be so complex,
Intricate designs and trotrofex,
Make the butterfly even more intense,
Creating their powerful presence.
They bring with them cheers,
Seem to have no fears,
Living life with regears,
Leaving behind jiblears.
In the bright light of the Sun,
So many people the butterflies stun,
Eyes wide, so colundun,
Watching the butterflies is so mondapun.
Flutter, Flutter, Flutter,
The brilliance and the bitbatattuter,
Make the butterfly so ambudutter,
And show their true vlunter.
Flit, Flap, Fly,
The wings of the Butterfly,
Free flying through the sky,
Absolutely beautiful, so boudhie.
Nonsense Words Key:
Boudhie- Mesmerizing; extremely beautiful and graceful; perfect.
Glabsting- Gleaming; a certain appearance that means to look extremely bright, colorful, and beautiful.
Fortoble- Fierce; very powerful, in a gracious way.
Zoterplodeferfing- Completely unforgettable; something so exquisite that it's impossible not to remember.
Trotrofex- Brilliant colors and shapes that create an exquisite design.
Regears- No worries, and positive behaviors and attitudes.
Jiblears- Negativity in any way, whether it's through negative people, negative attitudes, or negative atmospheres, etc.
Colundun- Bright with happiness and wonder.
Mondapun- Thrilling, and exciting in a simple, gracious form.
Bitbatattuter- Delicate and dainty.
Ambudutter- Extremely unique, with fascinating qualities.
Vlunter- Beauty and style in a striking form.
I love that you connect it to nature. This poem made it to my top favorite! It is a very fun poem to read. How did you get the idea of this poem?
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ReplyDeleteI really, really love your poem! You used a lot of the poetic devices, and with all of your nonsense words, it still made perfect sense. You did an amazing job describing the butterflies. Amazing job! ☆
I like how you made the poem flow. I also liked how you gave the butterflies beautiful qualities.
ReplyDeleteI thought your poem was awesome! I liked how you used a piece of nature for inspiration. Do you like butterflies? I think they are beautiful and your poem was beautifully written! nice job!
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I liked how a lot of your words really described the butterflies. The words were so unique and they really described the beauty and gracefulness of the butterfly.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really nice poem. I like your nonsense words and how descriptive your definitions for them are. The poem is very beautiful and you didn't use simple words to rhyme or flow and that's what I really like about your poem.
ReplyDeleteYour use of sound devices are phenomenal. I was able to pick them out right away. For example, "Flit, Flap, Fly" that is onomatopoeia and alliteration. Two in one! The nonsense words you have are so deep and meaningful. It's nonsense, but it makes sense at the same time. You describe the butterflies as if it were the most wonderful part of nature. I like butterflies now.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Elenia - your words are deep and meaningful! Kudos to you!
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